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Plans — A museum in 1998 and after changes in 2008

The picture below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Task 1 · Map · 188 từ — viết theo đúng công thức 8020 của thầy Châu Cát Tường. Từ & cụm ăn điểm được tô sáng ngay trong bài.
Hướng làm
2 sơ đồ quá khứ — chia tây / giữa+đông.
Dàn ý
IntroductionRephrase: sơ đồ bảo tàng 1998 và sau thay đổi 2008.
OverviewTiện ích cho khách + sắp xếp phòng trưng bày; cafe, cửa vé giữ nguyên.
Body 1Nửa tây: restaurant, phòng tạm thời, shop, gửi đồ.
Body 2Giữa + đông: vườn, đài phun, WC, phòng cố định.
Bài mẫu

The given plans illustrate the layout of a museum in 1998 and the changes made to it by 2008.

Overall, the museum underwent a dramatic transformation, especially in terms of its visitor facilities and the arrangement of its exhibition rooms, while the cafe and the ticket entrance stayed in their original positions.

In terms of the western half, the permanent exhibition rooms which had occupied this area in 1998 were removed. In their place, a large restaurant was opened in the north-western corner, and the temporary exhibition room was moved from the south-western corner to the middle of the western side. As a result, the south-west was freed up for the bags and coats area and the shop, both of which were relocated there from the south-east.

Turning to the centre and the east, the garden was reduced in size, with a cafe sitting area added in its north-western corner and two fountains installed in the middle. Furthermore, the WC was moved from the south-east to a position next to the cafe in the north. Finally, the permanent exhibition rooms were extended to cover the entire eastern side.

188 từ
Từ & cụm hay (theo thứ tự trong bài)
was relocated / moved from … tođược dời từ … tới
was freed up forđược dọn trống cho
was reduced in sizebị thu nhỏ
were extended to coverđược mở rộng phủ
stayed in their original positionsgiữ vị trí cũ
the arrangement ofcách bố trí
Đề có KEY (chú giải) — gọi đúng tên Permanent Exhibition Rooms.
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